Changeset 15557 for main/waeup.kofa/trunk/docs/source/userdocs/students/workflow.rst

Timestamp:

20 Aug 2019, 10:19:26 (5 years ago)

Author:

Henrik Bettermann

Message:

Change workflow text according to Maryanne's suggestions.

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• main/waeup.kofa/trunk/docs/source/userdocs/students/workflow.rst (modified) (1 diff)

main/waeup.kofa/trunk/docs/source/userdocs/students/workflow.rst

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-Student registration starts with the first login of the student into
-state ``admitted``. After filling the email adress and phone number
-field, and also uploading a passport picture, the student
-immediately proceeds with the clearance sub-workflow. S/he starts
-clearance **(b)** either directly or by using a clearance access
-code, depending on the configuration of the portal. After filling
-the clearance form and uploading all necessary documents, the
-student requests clearance **(c)** which can be either accepted **(d)**
-or rejected **(-c)** by a clearance officer. A cleared student
-can enter the 'cyclical' part of the workflow which starts after
-first school fee payment **(f)**.
+Student registration starts with the first login of the student
+into state ``admitted``. After editing the email address and phone
+number fields, and also uploading a passport picture (subject to
+customization), the student immediately proceeds with the clearance
+sub-workflow. S/he starts clearance **(b)** either directly or by
+using a clearance access code, depending on the configuration of
+the portal. After filling the clearance form and uploading all
+necessary documents, the student requests clearance **(c)** which
+can be either accepted **(d)** or rejected **(-c)** by a clearance
+officer. A cleared student can enter the 'cyclical' part of the
+workflow which starts after first school fee payment **(f)**.
 
 A properly registering undergraduate student creates a new study