Changeset 13175 for main/waeup.kofa/trunk/docs

Timestamp:

17 Jul 2015, 03:35:16 (9 years ago)

Author:

Henrik Bettermann

Message:

Some finetuning.

Location:

main/waeup.kofa/trunk/docs/source/userdocs

Files:

• browsing.rst (modified) (2 diffs)
• hostels.rst (modified) (1 diff)

main/waeup.kofa/trunk/docs/source/userdocs/browsing.rst

@@ -45 +45 @@
 
 Officers see a double-column theme after logging in. The left column
-contains a box (side box) which contains links to the user's
+contains a box (side box) which provides links to the user's
 preferences (My Preferences) and roles (My Roles). It also contains
-links to the various sections of Kofa depending on the permissions
-the officer has has obtained. Possible sections are: 'Portal
+links to the various sections of Kofa, depending on the permissions
+the officer has obtained. Possible sections are: 'Portal
 Configuration', 'Officers', 'Data Center', 'Reports' and 'Access
-Codes'. The side box expands when the officer accesses an
-applicant or student record. The box gives direct access to the
-pages of an applicant or student record respectively.
+Codes'. The side box expands, when the officer accesses a student
+record. The box gives direct access to the pages of the student.
 
 .. image:: images/multicolumn.png
@@ -82 +81 @@
   display and input widgets (= views) for the fields defined in the
   Zope Schema package. Auto-generation is done with `grok.AutoFields`
-  which takes the fields, declared in an interface, and renders
-  display or input widgets, according to the schema declaration, for
-  display or edit forms respectively.
+  which takes the fields, declared in an
+  :ref:`interface<kofa_interfaces>`, and renders display or input
+  widgets, according to the schema declaration, for display or edit
+  forms respectively.
 
 Whereas display and add form pages are usually shared by officers

main/waeup.kofa/trunk/docs/source/userdocs/hostels.rst

@@ -169 +169 @@
 same-named action of the `HostelManageFormPage`. `Hostel.updateBeds`
 iterates over all block letters, floor levels, room numbers and bed
-letters, which haven been configured on the `HostelManageFormPage`.
+letters, which have been configured on the `HostelManageFormPage`.
 In each bed letter iteration loop a bed is added and the `bed_id`,
 `bed type` as well as the consecutive `bed_number` are determined