Changeset 13072

Timestamp:

18 Jun 2015, 07:56:26 (10 years ago)

Author:

Henrik Bettermann

Message:

Some minor linguistic changes.

Location:

main/waeup.kofa/trunk/docs/source/userdocs/students

Files:

• browser.rst (modified) (2 diffs)
• interfaces.rst (modified) (3 diffs)
• workflow.rst (modified) (1 diff)

main/waeup.kofa/trunk/docs/source/userdocs/students/browser.rst

@@ -72 +72 @@
 edit all of their data all the time. Edit access is restricted by
 workflow states or other conditions. Officers' access is much less
-restricted and we therefore speak of 'managing' instead of 'editing'
+restricted, and we therefore speak of 'managing' instead of 'editing'
 data. In most cases, Kofa uses two different form pages which
 require different permissions: An `EditFormPage` requires the
@@ -443 +443 @@
 
 
-Bed Relocation
---------------
+Relocation
+----------
 
 Officers with `ManageHostels` permission do see a 'Relocate student'

main/waeup.kofa/trunk/docs/source/userdocs/students/interfaces.rst

@@ -74 +74 @@
   `Zope Schema`_ documentation.
 
-  A very powerful Zope Schema field is `Choice`. Choice fields 'are
+  A very powerful Zope Schema field is `Choice`. Choice fields are
   constrained to values drawn from a specified set, which can be
-  static or dynamic'. This set can be a simple list of choices (=
-  `values`), or a `vocabulary` or `source` which produce dynamic
+  static or dynamic. This set can be a simple list of choices (=
+  `values`), a `vocabulary` or a `source` which produce dynamic
   choices.
 
   **Vocabularies and sources** are very similar. The latter is a newer
   concept of producing choices and considered to replace vocabularies.
-  In Kofa we are using both. Common to both is that a set of values is
+  In Kofa we use both. Common to both is, that a set of values is
   accompanied by a user-friendly title, which is displayed on pages
   (e.g. in select boxes) instead of a less informative value token or
@@ -207 +207 @@
 fixed and must not be changed during course of study.
 
-Very import - or even most important - are the parameters which
+Very important - or even most important - are the parameters which
 describe the current state of the student's study course.
 `current_session`, `current_level`, `current_verdict`,
@@ -214 +214 @@
 student has reached the current study level and state in the portal.
 All these attributes are set automatically by the portal und must
-(normally) not be changed via manage form pages.
+(normally) not be changed via manage form pages or import.
 
 What is a verdict? A verdict is the individual judgement of a jury

main/waeup.kofa/trunk/docs/source/userdocs/students/workflow.rst

@@ -91 +91 @@
 code, depending on the configuration of the portal. After filling
 the clearance form and uploading all necessary documents, the
-student requests clearance **(c)** which can be either accepted **(d)
-** or rejected **(-c)** by a clearance officer. A cleared student
+student requests clearance **(c)** which can be either accepted **(d)**
+or rejected **(-c)** by a clearance officer. A cleared student
 can enter the 'cyclical' part of the workflow which starts after
 first school fee payment **(f)**.